I've had some success with this author, notably with the first daughter series, but I didn't like her Open Minds which was a lousy, trope, clichéd garbage can of a YA novel. Sadly, it turned out that this really wasn't really a novel, but a disappointingly short introduction to a series. I thought it was just about okay for what it was, but I felt cheated that I didn't get a real story out of it. I didn't get into any of the characters and I sure didn't want to get into an open-ended series about it.
The plot is set in a dystopian climate-challenged future where the power engineers are considered rather heroic in that they provide electricity to homes, the residents of which are being ravaged by rolling blackouts and regular disease outbreaks and therefore paranoid about letting strangers near them. Ironically, there's nothing in this theoretically introductory volume to explain how the world got that way. Yes, it's on the fast track to a future that could conceivably be like that, but we're already using RNA vaccines and talking of gene therapy cures for viral and bacterial diseases. Where did that go? Why did the efforts governments are starting to put into place fail to save the planet?
There seem to be unaccountable and unexplained lapses in technology. For example, homes are expected to make use of rechargeable batteries during power outages, but nowhere do we read of these same homes having any sort of solar or wind power independently of the grid. We already have that today, so what happened to it? There's no explanation to be found here. Worse, Lucia discovers that the batteries in her new home have been discharged to the point of being irreparably damaged, but apparently there was no sort of warning device built into the batteries to alert the owners of this problem! We already have warnings in our electric and hybrid vehicles, on our laptops, and even on our phones that the battery is mostly discharged so we know to recharge, so what happened to that warning on a critical home system? Again, no explanation.
We already have drones and robots, but they seem to feature poorly, too, so there are holes in the story that the author seems to have no interest in filling, which in turn makes her world-building poor and which kept jolting me out of suspension of disbelief. I didn't expect her to have detailed explanations for everything, nor would such a thing have made for good reading, but to have some sort of story that covered the obvious is expected, and she unapologetically fell short of this requirement.
The 'energy islands' seem to be in the ocean, and it's while doing a preliminary inspection of the underwater portion of her new island that Lucia discovers some weird damage. When she reports this up the chain of command, she's essentially accused of hallucinating, and the images she shot of the damage have curiously disappeared. When she returns to take more photos only a day later, there's suddenly no sign of the damage. It's all been repaired. That's a bit of a stretch
When investigating why power seems to be getting tapped from the generator, and looking for a potential target using all that power, she discovers that the area she wanted to investigate has been burned causing so much damage as to leave it unrecognizable and herself without evidence again. She tries to take more photos under the island, and she almost dies because of a sabotaged oxygen tank. The thing is that Lucia is a seasoned diver. Air has weight, especially when compressed, and you can tell the difference between an empty and a full tank, especially if it's aluminum. If her tank was seriously light on air, she would have known as soon as she picked it up regardless of what the tank gauge said, and for her to never check the gauge while she's diving is not a sign of a seasoned diver. It's the sign of a dumbass.
Clearly someone is hiding something, but even when Lucia gets photos that cannot be deleted since the next camera she uses is old tech and not hooked up to any network, she doesn't think for a minute of publishing this evidence out on the net, and thereby protecting herself and the family she has started lodging with, and this in turn makes her look like an idiot. The worst part of the story though is that there's no resolution to anything. We have no questions answered, and are expected to buy more volumes of the novel to get beyond this prologue. That doesn't work for me, not when it's so average. I don't even like prologues and normally skip them, so I can't commend this one at all, and I sure as hell don't want to read any mroe poorly-written pap like this.
